More and more people in the city live in homes with small space or no outdoor areas Do you think it is a negative or positive development

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More and more people in the city live in homes with small space or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development ?

It is true that the increasing number of people live in the urban city without a much more space in outside or inside of their house. While living in the small apartment and building could be reasonable than normal living standards. I would believe that these is an negative development.
There are several reasons account for why enterprise provided house to people cheaper price, this is lead to more and more urban resident preferred to stay at their own home that they have considered one of the most best choice. In some developing countries, people immigrant from oversea create high population density , and the available house are not enough to accommodate in significant increase demands. In many skyscraper, studio apartment where built to reserve for communities and individual become an proper housing and the best way to building seller earn high profit. However, many small house are increasingly common, because many people prepare to live in limited areas or suffer lower-level living condition, they not affordable to pay an expensive house. This is an better choice to live on the street.
However, this tendency affect directly to housing market which is appeared the huge of negative impacts. Firstly, without enough space for individual and personal life. Even with an developing countries like England, traditional house have been replaced by the wide range of field in the city where is divided separately into many functional room for many specific purposes, as well as uncomfortable to share bathroom and kitchen. Secondly, another characteristic of the urban life is lack of one garden or even a space for children learning and playing outside activities. If the children must not to play under the sun in outside, they will not to develop their physical abilities and not essential skill, like sports, extra-learning curriculum in outside.
In conclusion, many advocates would argue that welcoming of small space is one of the financial choice, and this trend should be considered as an negative development.

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... and this trend should be considered as an negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22865853659 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77221310694 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5359080522 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220358050751 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07166493505 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540204968068 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138343262905 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620069280381 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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