Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?

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Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?

In the recent years, privately operated health care are crucial and become common for priority groups in any circumstance. Although it brings major negative impacts, but many people believe that institutions of private health care should expand in a large-scale in society and have a considerable favour of public.

On the one hand, private medical treatment has its own negative impacts. Firstly, medical service of private companies have a high fluctuation cost for patients, which has a bigger fear of sensitive groups. The indifferent action of the government lead to gain higher cost of unimportant fees or list of expensive machinery which have to pay by patients. Secondly, employees with lower qualification is not expect to treat life-threaten diseases. Thus, private institutions in health care has more view in quantity than quality.

In generall, all services are support by individual and a estimate aim is rise more profit-making for private companies. Additionally, any public health care can not connect with remote areas, which is a unfavorable condition for people in unlucky groups when they apply for a priority position in hospital as well as barely to receive guarantee for heath. This may not come up with patients' expectation and even barely to receive guarantee for heath.

On the other hand, private-run health institution should be available for demand of majority people. Firstly, it service faster and convenient in some emergency circumstance. For instance, people not have to spent much time for wasting-room in hospital and fight against with the numerous death of serious accidents in the road or even is only injury slightly. Secondly, obvious advantages is more and more undergraduate students who have more opportunities to have a successful career with stable income in private companies.

In conclusion, private medical treatment is curial for necessary demand of human in health nowadays. I personally believe that the benefit outweigh disadvantages and people should notice more on private health insurance services for better to access to health care.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: expected
...ployees with lower qualification is not expect to treat life-threaten diseases. Thus, ...
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... services are support by individual and a estimate aim is rise more profit-making...
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Suggestion: an
...not connect with remote areas, which is a unfavorable condition for people in unl...
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...e condition for people in unlucky groups when they apply for a priority position ...
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Message: Did you mean 'services'?
Suggestion: services
... demand of majority people. Firstly, it service faster and convenient in some emergency...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44036697248 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96754918031 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4043034104 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259384489196 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952616017722 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769754396267 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166380135247 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768164179486 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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