Some people think that should stop teaching student by using books, because student find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video game and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Essay topics:

Some people think that should stop teaching student by using books, because student find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video game and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is true that advance in technology become increasingly common for people, particularly children who are encourage to learn by providing necessary information in movies, TV programs, online game and computer instead of using book is the best method that pupil can be learn. While many people believe that these benefit the most of education. I disagree completely with this trends.

On the one hand, traditional methods for its advantages by using book are suitable for all age and practical for the goal of universal education. Firstly, children will have an satisfation and motivation to acquired more experiences and skills if they can access the wide range of enjoyable and fun materials, particularly interactive-reading activities associate with enthusiastic teacher. Secondly, it is practical for non-profit companies to reach achievement of one million book for pupil who have lower-level background. For example, “ngày hội sách việt nam” campaign. This not only promote creativity of the young on reading. it also advertised reading culture and charitable donations as an meaningful action.

On the other hand, learning from TV programs, game online, films also brings for children other kind of interests, stimulating their abilities and national pride but it would have some drawback in some extents. One reason for that children will ignored useful advises of their parents who even focus a much more time on entertainment programs if they not have an supervision of parental involvement. Another reason for that practicing exercise and physical activities in outside are not a top priority of the young.

In conclusion, although these have some obvious advantages. I believe that it is better in which people should motivate on children reading book on daily basis because of a welcome change instead of using online foundation to learn something.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ommon for people, particularly children who are encourage to learn by providing necessa...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...r people, particularly children who are encourage to learn by providing necessary informa...
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...particularly children who are encourage to learn by providing necessary information in m...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he best method that pupil can be learn. While many people believe that these benefit ...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...f education. I disagree completely with this trends. On the one hand, traditional...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... education. Firstly, children will have an satisfation and motivation to acquired ...
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Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ote creativity of the young on reading. it also advertised reading culture and cha...
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ing culture and charitable donations as an meaningful action. On the other hand...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'ignore'
Suggestion: ignore
...ents. One reason for that children will ignored useful advises of their parents who eve...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...entertainment programs if they not have an supervision of parental involvement. An...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47602739726 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02123901019 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7050104907 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15056202494 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468499321004 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573657520308 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112918125823 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058143320237 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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