Modern scientist need specialist in certain fields not in others. Some people think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people claim that pupils who choose areas that are essential for the community should get state authority's support. This essay will argue that the disadvantages of this outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, I believe that all students must be valued equally and all humans have the right to earn funds to continue their learning. Although, the government funding has encouraged scholars to do research or higher study on a specific field they select, because without state helps they cannot carry out the cost of the investigation, but it should not be limited in specific fields that help the society. In other words, if the state government has signed this protocol, the literacy rate could have been decreased. This certainly affects the country's overall economy. Another demerit would be, the competition in job markets will increase for a specific job, and that must be raised the unemployment rank. For instance, when we get support in specific areas we will definitely continue to study those courses, so the majority of students will do. As a result, during a job search, there would be more people for a single vacancy, so many people will remain jobless.
On the other hand, this scheme will bring few benefits to a specific discipline, such as, health care. As many people can get involved in this sector, this certainly helps to improve the services in hospitals and diagnostic centres. For example, sometimes we see that people in small cities do not get proper treatment due to specialist doctors. If scholars get ministry help to study in medical science, medical management in countries could have been developed.
In conclusion, however, this approach has few merits, but it has more problems. Thus, I think the law should not be applied for just a few profits, which will cause many uprising dilemmas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...nguage due to increasing globalization. A large number of people insist that pursuing a non-nativ...
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Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...riences abroad and make friends overseas , while improving their foreign language ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39636363636 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15671628405 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2574478251 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13685893584 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482681847048 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295299656048 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879157849967 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265476594341 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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