There is no doubt that technological advancement is a huge milestone of this twenty-first century. People are accepting technology in all aspects of their daily life. In particular, Technologies are being used in most of the working place to get the job done. In my opinion, people are preferring advanced technology due to their comfort and few advantages, but depending too much on technology might impact in a severe way.
It is undeniable that people tend to accept new technology due to various advantages. Firstly, by using modern technology task can be completed in a timely manner and accurately. For instance, computers are being used in offices to complete different types of complex calculations. There is very less chance that the result will come out as wrong, while getting this job through human would put some suspicion about the outcome. Secondly, By using the latest technology, a larger output can be received in a very short time, while it is quite impossible to expect the same result through a traditional way. For instance, Optical Machine Reader in short OMR is being used to check answer sheets of multiple choice question. It can check multiple copies at the same time.
However, Dependency never brings any good outcome. Hench, too much dependency on technology certainly no a good sign for a nation or a country. Firstly, If everything is done by modern technology, it will cause unemployment as well as a severe health problem like obesity. For instance, A computer can complete a job of ten people resulting in unemployment. Again, People will do less physical work which will cause obesity.
In conclusion, adopting new technology in every aspect of life is the first step to become digitalized, but too much relying could bring negative impacts on the development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...advancement is a huge milestone of this twenty first century. People are accepting technolog...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...get the job done. In my opinion, people are preferring advanced technology due to their comfor...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sever way" with adverb for "sever"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing too much on technology might impact in a sever way. It is undeniable that people tend ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...echnology might impact in a sever way. It is undeniable that people tend to acc...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
...spicion about the outcome. Secondly, By using latest technology, a larger output can expect ...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t technology, a larger output can expect be received in a very short time, while ...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...much dependency on technology certainly no a good sign for a nation or a country. ...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (wil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'causes'.
Suggestion: causes
...le will do less physical work which wil cause the obesity. In conclusion, adopting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, in short, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10437710438 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86040362108 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7585016904 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188934585584 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597163918793 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517491656672 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117863609509 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560764590506 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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