It is argued that in the world of advancement children spend their most of time on electronic gadgets. This essay agrees with this statement because it has bad impact on their eyes and also and child get obese.
Childrens are using digital screen gadgets are facing many problems related to their eyesight. As the light rays came from screen of these gadgets can harm their eye motor neuron and thier brain cells hence these children tend to face difficulties in visualising longer and shorter distance objects and thinking process. In the recent research has done by opticals of united kingdom the reports found that child which spent more times on gadgets are facing problem in performing tasks compared to those who use it for limit time because of the issue they are facing to see the objects clearly.
Additionally, excessive time look at computer or other digital screens also impact on their health . Kids prefer to eat food while using these gadgets and mostly prefer to eat junk food which effect on their daily calorification intakes. Food did not get digested properly which results in getting overweight. A research has found that 40 percent of children who are facing problem of getting obese are because of their eating habits while using these digital screens.
To conclude, longer hours in front of screen aplliances causes harm to their visual abilities and health. It is therefore considered that parents should monitor and control the hours their kids spend starring at electronic gadgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.068 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38688314657 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3273747449 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105603935782 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493454428404 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441245359228 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765049322686 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435789317202 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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