Nowadays, more and more citizens around the world prefer to residing in the countryside instead of living in the city, although they have to take a long journey to work in the cities everyday. Many are of the opinion that by doing this it causes a myriad of problems including traffic congestion and environment deterioration. The following paragraph will provide some practical and sensible solutions to solve this problem before the conclusion is reached.
To begin with, companies should provide employees facilities including public and private facilities to encourage them to live in the cities. For example, employers offer employees accommodation, especially flats or studios, which is located near working places. Moreover, they might give a free card for using public transportation. Secondly, it is not only the responsible for the companied to resolve this situation, but also the government should take action as well. One of the reasons why people choose to live in the outskirt of the town is surrounding environment which is full of pasture or forests. Consequently, the law enforcement agency should diminish some areas in the cities and replace with a park with a pond or a lake. By doing this, city dwellers can spend their leisure in the park in their free time. Moreover, the government should launch the policies that banned or restricted buildings in the area of Green belt around the city. In a consequence, this city now is considered to be eco-friendly city and it might encourage more and more people to reside in the city.
In conclusion, to persuade people to reside in the city, both companies and the government should join hands to find the best way to solve this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reside'?
Suggestion: reside
...ore citizens around the world prefer to residing in the countryside instead of living in...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ke a long journey to work in the cities everyday. Many are of the opinion that by doing ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0780141844 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86061875843 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2828067872 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163965419291 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556585440128 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661458699207 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103650770329 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603927754056 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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