More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
As times have changed, people's perception about gadgets has seen a drastic change. Many believe that children who are allowed to play on computers and tablets have a high chance of developing technology skills. This essay will highlight the advantages and disadvantages of the stated view and will arrive into a final conclusion.
To begin with,usage of computers as well as gadgets has become a habitual in many youngsters, which has quite a good number of advantages. Firstly, there are enormous of online trainings, educational applications available now, which can be easily assessed with a help of a smartphone and it in turn helps students to enhance their skills. For example, recently, there is an application named whitehat jr developed especially for young people who are passionate to learn coding. Secondly, a lot of youtube channels are introduced which includes channels specific to educational purpose, general knowledge, science and technology and so on. Hence, gadgets play a significant role in learning.
On the other hand, it does have disadvantages such as health effects, crime rates, hacking. When children spend too much of time using a gadget, they tend to get eye sight problems. Besides that, teenagers who are unaware of the hackers can lose some confidential and private information about themselves. Nowadays, it can be seen that children are more prone to criminal activities and sexual abuse as a result of over usage of some internet sites.
To infer, with proper guidance and limited handling of gadgets can definitely help children to learn a lot as it has equal number of positives and negatives on the individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21722846442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89522072045 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8389178333 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209910890586 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628684761181 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685356752432 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116514351214 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568655483664 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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