Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement
In this fast moving world, people expect to be endowed with a plethora of options in each and everything they wanted to own. Consequently, with the growing demand, people do have a lot of choices before picking up the best for them. I partially agree with the statement, as there are few out there, who are given with very less or with no options at all.
Firstly, some people are habituated with having a surplus list of alternatives. Those are always given with the options and made to select. For instance, if we take Garments, we have various cloth brands that manufactures a wide range of dresses according to the trend, materials, comfort. Additionally to buy a dress, we have a long list of ways, such as outlets, online sites, trustworthy resellers and so on. Similarly, to buy any gadgets, for example, a mobile phone, many brands with quite intriguing models are available. Hence, for people who can afford things are definitely provided with an enormous choices.
However, there are some people, who could not even have choices in the food they eat. Some financially low people who cannot afford their daily bread are left with no options. With the low-income, they are made to follow the same routine everyday. On the other hand, I believe, providing many, different choices will confuse people rather helping them. To illustrate, young children when asked to select a toy from a variety of toys, will be confused to pick one, which leads to pick a random one. Eventually at the end, they are left unsatisfied with the one they select. Therefore, it is wise to have a limited set of options.
To conclude, though recently, a lot of choices are available in each and everything, they are not easily accessible for every people. So, I partially agree with the given statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun out seems to be countable; consider using: 'few outs'.
Suggestion: few outs
... agree with the statement, as there are few out there, who are given with very less or ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...rding to the trend, materials, comfort. Additionally to buy a dress, we have a long list of ...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'choice'?
Suggestion: choice
...re definitely provided with an enormous choices. However, there are some people, who...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hey are made to follow the same routine everyday. On the other hand, I believe, providin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83116883117 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61160080449 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8605813907 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180369434082 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609226338477 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462386269222 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111759696888 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200406862686 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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