Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what extent you agree or disagree
Language plays a vital role in order to communicate with people. To be specific, speaking a common language throughout the nations would help individuals to converse with each other irrespective of the local language and place they live. I completely agree to the point which states the difficulty of people when compelled to speak in a foreign language.
Nowadays, we could see as many people who move to other countries for their studies and work. While migrating to some countries, people are required to have knowledge on their national language before moving. Even though, they learn, few find it difficult to carry a simple conversation after they reach there. This has led to a serious social problem, for example, some struggles to build a good relationship among their colleagues, neighbours.
Besides, social problem, people are facing a lot of practical problems such as to have a day-to-day conversation where persons have to get their basic needs. To illustrate, a person visiting a supermarket or a market needs to talk in the foreign language to avail the products. Additionally, problem occurs in public places like railway station or a bus station, where a person is hearing an announcement in a local language and if he/she could understand the same, will definitely face a lot of issues in reaching their destinations.
To conclude, it is as important as to give priority to the national language, but to avoid the problems faced by the outsiders, it is better to speak in a common language which can be understandable by every one of all countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: few finds
...before moving. Even though, they learn, few find it difficult to carry a simple convers...
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...ng. Even though, they learn, few find it difficult to carry a simple conversation...
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...tation or a bus station, where a person is hearing an announcement in a local language and...
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... To conclude, it is as important as to give priority to the national language, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96079103027 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5965395201 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246690767967 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831312903056 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055724971323 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135284043566 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359502822263 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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