Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement
In this fast-moving world, people expect to be endowed with a plethora of options in each and everything they obtain. With the technology advances, people do have a lot of choices before picking up the best for them. I partially agree with the statement, as there are few out there, who are given with very less or with no options at all.
Firstly, some people are habituated with having a surplus list of alternatives. Those are always given with the options and made to select. For instance, to buy a dress, we can visit many outlets, or order from online sites or from trustworthy resellers and in every place, we could find a plenty of materials, brands, colours, textures. Similarly, to buy any gadgets, for example, a mobile phone, many brands with quite interesting models are available. Many times, these numerous products might confuse the consumers.
However, all those above mentioned options can be availed by the people who are financially well settled. There are some people, who could not even have choices in the food they eat. With the low income, they are made to follow the same routine everyday. Even though we have a lot of educational courses available to study, due to insufficient funds, poor people are made to work instead of continuing their studies.
To conclude, Though some have a wide range of options to consider, there are some who are not provided with any other possibilities instead allowed to choose only one
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun out seems to be countable; consider using: 'few outs'.
Suggestion: few outs
... agree with the statement, as there are few out there, who are given with very less or ...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lets, or order from online sites or from trustworthy resellers and in every place...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hey are made to follow the same routine everyday. Even though we have a lot of education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89068825911 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58995420314 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3343990446 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9230769231 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196340142509 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695970706401 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475079040782 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115445550607 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184024106974 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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