More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly. Why is this happening and what can we do to encourage this?
For years, society has witnessed the growing trend of individuals taking part in healthy diet with exercise on a regular basis. This can be attributed to numerous reasons such as higher life standards with a lot of measures aiming people to promote this tendency, which will be clarified and explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin, the rise of eating clean and practicing trends result from social enhancement, which prompt people to engage in higher quality of life. Firstly, as the explosion of civilization, humans recently are forced to face with hazardious aspects of life, such as surrounding habitats or sources of initial suppliments. This is due to the ambition of pursuing profits and prosperous of our money society without the ethical standard. As a result, there is an increasing number of deaths and lethal disease related to chemical exposion from surroundings, which has sparked off motivations for citizens to engage in healthier eating habits and physical acitivies for health-protecting purposes. Secondly, adapting healthy food and exercises helps not only humans’ physical strength, but also their spiritual minds. According to studies, healthy lifestyle is beneficial for people suffering from mental illnesses as these can probably provide requisite for body to generate positive chemicals. By this, individuals can get chance to engage enjoyment of life, which indirectly building an ideal society.
For a range of pros gained from healthy habits, there are a bunch of methods to promote people’s motivation by both authorities and publicity. In the first place, the engagement of diets and exercises can be widespread with the powerful strength of media and organizations. To give an example, social media’s executives can enhance practical campaigns focusing on the underlying positives of healthy habits adaption based on scientific research, which can perhaps increase citizen’s perception about keeping fit and active. Similarly, the authorities can perhaps make use of renowned individuals with well-shape body for helping communities paying attention on their health status in accordance with equipping them with essential facilities to participate in helpful activities enhancing social health.In conclusion, it is evident that there are numorous reasons for individuals to create a healthy lifestyle with high quality food and exercise; moreover, governments and companies with high reputation can join hands to engage community perception about maintain beneficial habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69576719577 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99071587689 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.554490335 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.615384615 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165852721617 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641996105632 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312408569448 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127097124914 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262619722043 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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