More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can government make urban life better for everyone?
Cities are believed to have immense significance in this present scenario; hence, city life is becoming more popular among the people, who live in rural areas. Although this living brings some of the complications for the migrants, yet the high authority can make sure the good living in the urban areas.
There are some detrimental effects that need to be considered to come along with living in the cities. Firstly, the cost of living seems to be a major problem for the inhabitants of those who live in a city as they have to pay for accommodation, food, and transport; thus, it leads to the highest expenditure of money. Secondly, urban areas tend to suffer from various social issues in terms of crime and poverty as compared to rural areas; meanwhile, people get the frustration, and afterward, it becomes the main reason of inconvenience among them. Finally, the contaminated environment becomes a big menace for humanity, since the presence of carbon dioxide elements creates noxious diseases such as cancer, asthma and many more.
The implementation of some possible steps may be lucrative for improving the condition of urban areas, the first and foremost is yet to control the prices of things, which are necessary for daily living. Having controlled the prices, it can lead to the smooth running of life in the cities. Besides this, the government has to promote public transport as well as ban private vehicles in order to protect the environment from harmful gases, which are ruinous for mankind.
In conclusion, living in the cities is extremely difficult for the migrators, but the government can make cities a better place for living with the help of appropriate strategies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0640569395 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76156125032 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2163996725 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.3 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35029129025 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127420157042 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922391367426 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224612101124 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890666193751 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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