More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that cities are often seen as the places of opportunities, which attracts a lost of people to migrate to. However, there are also some drawbacks in city life. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve inhabitants' life in cites.
The main problem for anyone who chooses to live in urban areas is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in rural areas. For example, many people migrate to a metropolis, resulting in an increasing in the demands for accommodations, food and services. Consequently, these people might survive in insanity conditions, lack of both education and medicine. Another issue is air pollution and traffic congestion. A dramatic rise in a number of commuters is a key factor influencing air quality, and this also puts a train on cities' infrastructure. Furthermore, a major worry for city residents is soaring crime rate in comparison with rural areas.
On the other hand, there are various measures that governments can take to tackle these problems. Firstly, a simple step to decrease cost of living is to invest money in the affordable or social housing projects. Secondly, an investment on developing cleaner public transport might not only curb traffic flows, but also reduce air pollution caused by vehicle emissions. A third option is to move industry and jobs to rural regions. By doing this, everyone will have equal opportunities to promote career prospects instead of finding job chances from large cities.
In conclusion, there are a range of steps governments could implement to enhance the quality of city life for all residents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01115241636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89915161462 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3513423423 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264786031157 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756142330306 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707098926327 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16133552627 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082881498753 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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