More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone
Cities can be seen as places of opprtunity. However, there are some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis such as overpopulation and air pollution problems, which can be addressed by governments.
Citizens are often struggling with the rapid influx of people in cities. In other words, if a great number of people migrant to cities, the total number of residents living grows up, which leads to the rising prices of houses, food and even basic commodities. For example, if you simply want to rent a room in London, it costs around £500 at minimum. As the increasing people in cities, citizens can more likely to sufffer from pollution due to the increasing of waste and usage of vehicles. And people who live in poor air quality are more easily to get asthama and many others respiratory hazards.
However, there are several approaches that governments can take to address these issues. First, authorities should move industry and jobs to rural areas and encourge people to work in there. That way, many people do not have to migrate to cities in order to find jobs, which means cities are not burdern from the overpopulation. Seconly, to release the air pollution level, governments can encourage the public to use public transport by improving their services or by organizing campaigns to raise people’s awareness about protecting the environment.
In conclusion, city life can be more stressful because of higher living costs and unhealthy than many people expect; however, these problems can be solved by governments by modernizing rural areas and or by improving public transportation services.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82671200065 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4934636933 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3023402588 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101901265305 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832181389814 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191232480156 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067784254288 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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