More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which can not be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
Various types of diseases in today’s advanced world are caused by new ways of life. This fact that modern medicines are not often able to treat these diseases should not enforce humans to use traditional medicines.
In my opinion, conventional medicines made of plants can affect only diseases which have been less dangerous. Therefore, to treat acute sicknesses, old remedies would not be practical. A large number of patients dying in the past prove this claim. Serious illnesses such as cholera and plague killed millions of people around the world. In other words, if new medicines had been used in ancient times, population of the world might be more currently.
Recent medicines introduced as a result of organized medical searches are more credible than old types not proved by science. To more clarification, several different technologies are used in order to provide new medicines. Before releasing these methods, they have been tested on animals such as mousses and monkeys whose bodies are fairly similar to human ones. These tests are examined to be sure that there will be not any side effects which might be harmful for human. As a result, science and technology are going to present new efficient ways which are more reliable.
To conclude, while traditional medicines are not applicable to decrease modern ills, new scientific medical methods are becoming more and more popular.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, therefore, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22026431718 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65015230956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625550660793 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.556419761 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263542193138 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832979363358 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562256803341 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157382066118 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152524713534 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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