More and more people now own cars. What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars? How can these problems be solved?
Entwined with the development of technology and increasing demand of using convenient transportation, the number of cars owners has been going up, which can probably leads to several resulting problems.
Firstly, issues with regards to environment are obviously inescapable if people are more interested in using cars as daily means of transport. Specifically, air surroundings will become polluted more acutely due to the disproportionate volume of emissions from this genre of transportation. Secondly, natural resources consuming will also be boosted in order to meet demand of increasing usage of cars. Thirdly, the plain fact is that traffic would be heavier, which induces traffic congestion. And many other repercussions are likely to arise as as consequence of the usage of private cars.
Actionable solutions are really necessary in order to tackle these adverse results. Personally, I believe that public transports need encouraging by subsidizing for people using them or raising tax on cars buyers. In addition, developing public transport services system aims to create more flexibility and convenience for users.
In conclusion, this phenomenon comes as no surprise to contemporary society. However, it necessitates viable and appropriate antidotes from authorities so as to be resolved as effectively as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: as
...other repercussions are likely to arise as as consequence of the usage of private car...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... appropriate antidotes from authorities so as to be resolved as effectively as possible....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75757575758 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2889608609 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1823017374 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219794049417 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676265415853 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444418779192 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103900604128 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686781068122 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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