More and more people prefer to buy readymade food from restaurants or convience stories instead of cooking for themselves. What are advantages and disadvantages of this ?
In this contemporary epok, majority of individuals prefer to eat street food and restaurants meals rather than cooking food at home. There are plethora of merits of this rubric and the former also cannot be neglected. Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the benefits of eating food at street shops and restaurants. The primary reason is that, it is more convinient and people who are poverty stricken, they are viable to afford such street foods. Whereas they are unable to cook food at home because of expensive products viz gas, vegetables and stove. For instance, in India, most of people are live in slum areas and they eat street food on their daily basis. Apart from this, individuals have hectic schedule owing to which they prefer restaurant food because they do not have enough time to cook by themselves. Therefore, street food are not only cheaper but also cooked easily which leads to preservation of time in busy schedule.
However, there are also few of drawbacks of eating food at street markets. The cardinal point is consider that it can leads to fatal disease. To be more precise, individuals usually eat fast food on street market. Due to which, they may suffer from diseases viz obesity, problem related to cholesterol level. While, if people prefer food which are making at home it is better for their health. Because, they know how much vitamins and nutrients they put that in food. Along with this, bond among the family also would be strong, if they eat food at home. Hence, they may protect from diseases and it can also leads toward strong bond.
To recapitulate, although there are some cons of this notion which involves fatal diseases. Yet, the pros are not overlooked viz easily affordable and cooked faster.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90066225166 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43845340279 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0459964677 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.8947368421 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207604885682 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664026186299 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050019563432 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132074262892 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487827476547 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.