More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals, many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that psychological assistance is what is required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, more and more prisons are being erected to become houses to crimes around the world. It is believed that a key to crime problem is a long duration of imprisonment, whereas the other think that there are some better alternative ways of reducing crime such as medical and psychological therapy. In my viewpoint, I agree with the second opinion, and this essaay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, many people feel that criminals should be in prison for a long period of time in order to tackle with crime issue. Admittedly, long-term imprisonment offenders from committing more illicit activities and doing harm to society. However, I suppose that putting them in jail for a long time does not completely reducing crime rate. Imagine a person engaging in a murder, he receives a long duration prison sentence in order to be deterred from doing more wrong things, but there still be more and more people follow his footsteps, do the same things as him, so the percentage of delinquency would not only not diminish, but would increase even more. Furthermore, if prisoners stay in prison for too long, they will have a sense of frustration and traumatic, especially those who have poor mentality.
On the other hand, I think there are some better ways to address this problem by putting medical and psychological aid. One of the reasons is that those therapies could help them to alleviate their physical and mental problem. Obviously, there are many prisoners have terrible memories in prison that impact adversely their mind. Gradually, those memories wowuld turn to obsessions, and make them feel traumatic and anxious. When they receive medical and psychological treatment, they recover and come back to their normal life. Hence, treatment of both mental and physical illnesses can be a suitable method, helping patients to gain their conciousness and reintegrate with the community.
In conclusion, many people believes the best way to reduce crime is to sentence crimes to long duration imprisonment, so that they can be prevent from committing more wrong doings and posing threats to society. In my opinion, people taking part in illegal activities can be better if they receive psychological and medical help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, still, whereas, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0781671159 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71574277602 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1081964958 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346641032791 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106522892091 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734802957235 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21371770447 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793060849361 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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