More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
More and more people are having children in later life than early age because of change in trend. Although it gives time for one’s to build their economy background as well as gives freedom, it has demerits people might change their mindset due to the external influence. In my opinion, the benefit that people gain of having children very lately in life outweighs the disadvantages.
Firstly, individuals will have time to support their household. To be more precise, if people (or) a newly married couple decided to have a child they need to be ready to raise the baby in a very comfortable zone. For example, parents must have at least some adequate amount of money to support child’s daily life, education. Another reason, they will have some time to spend to travel different places. In addition, if one of the individual wanted to purse masters can get external support from one of the household member. Therefore, by recording above reasons and examples postpone of having a baby is beneficial.
Secondly, there is a slight possibility that parents might change their thought of having children due to some reasons. First reason, government might introduce policies like no child get benefits because of overpopulation. Second reason, parents might focuses too much in the work and forgetting about having a child. Last one is infertility. For instance, a recent study has shown that in India more than 30% of female population has lost their ability of reproduction. These are some disadvantages.
To sum up, general population is changing their way of having a baby in early age to future life. Even though it gives freedom plus giving a chance of saving huge sum of money, people might forget about having a child. I personally believe that advantages overshadow disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08754208754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77227288425 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.139584885 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228314393719 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702359894625 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484800404492 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145384706387 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047689458198 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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