More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently, most people tend to have babies lately than the past. In this essay, I will examine the reasons why this has been occurred and will evaluate whether this is positive or negative.
There are several factors which play a role in the situation of having a child lately. First, the advancement in medical technology help the middle ages people have a child easier. As a result, it is unnecessary to pregnant in younger age which those mothers are healthier and strong enough to give a birth. Another cause is that most people at the present day have a higher education level and spend a long period of study. For example, the compusory level of studying at school was only at grade 10 in the past. Nevertheless, nowadays all students are required to study at grade 12 in minimum with the new norm to finish their education level in Bachelor degree or Master degree. This will also cause most people to have a new family more lately than the past resulting in delaying in giving a birth.
This has both benefits and drawbacks. First of all, the older couple has more readiness for raising a child in terms of their financial status. Due to the fact that they tend to have more stability in their professional area and have a higher salary from working for a long time. This could lead to have more affordability to provide a higher standard of living to their child, such as healthier food, famous school, and useful learning activities. Moreover, these parents have more time to focus on their child as they have more stability in occupation. Accordingly, childrend will have a warm family and are taken care closely protecting them to cause some social problems. There are, however, a number of negative impacts of having a child in the middle ages. First, their grandparents could be too old to help raising a child. For example, the 40 years old pregnance’s parent is almost 70 years old, or some of these family have no grandparents left. Another point to be considered is that there could have a generation gap between older parents and their child leading to some difficulty to understand each other.
To sum up, there are many reasons why people tend to have a child in their later age, such as the medical technology advancement, people having a higher education. This results in several effects which in my opinion I think the advantages outweigh drawbacks since I give a priority to a readiness of having a child at first to reduce social problems in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to raise' or 'raise'.
Suggestion: to raise; raise
...r grandparents could be too old to help raising a child. For example, the 40 years old ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this family' or 'these families'?
Suggestion: this family; these families
...rent is almost 70 years old, or some of these family have no grandparents left. Another poin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73963133641 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58393881325 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493087557604 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1281399746 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9523809524 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247099231115 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795393822067 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520225854524 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169814548644 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261919010336 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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