More people live alone today than they did in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Unlike previous generations, people are likely to live separately with their family these days. From my perspective, this is a positive development which can help individuals more mature. However, pressure is anticipated later on in their lives.
It is undeniable that the trend of living alone has many negative consequences related to psychological problems and higher cost of living. Firstly, a single-member family tends to suffer from loneliness or isolation because they hardly share their sorrow or confidence with others. A typical example at the workplace is that when the employees work under high pressure or harsh working environment, if they cannot reveal their sadness or stress, it will affect adversely their mental state. Secondly, single-person family member also shoulders the higher cost of living due to struggling with accommodation, transportation or food on a daily basis. For instance, Vietnamese youngsters migrate from the rural areas to big cities, consequently, this leads them to commit crimes owning to bearing the total expenses.
From the opposite viewpoint, living independently brings a wide range of benefits regarding enhancing personal skill development and satisfying with the freedom of each person . One advantage is that students tend to become more self-independent when they live far away from their homes. Some basic skills could be gradually improved including cookery or manageable skills. Furthermore, people are more mature and responsible for their lives. They know how to deal with their problems without any help. Another plus point of this trend is that no one forces them what they should do or not. They completely choose and decide their future without any regulations from their elder members in the family.
In conclusion, although living alone has several advantages, I believe that the disadvantages of this trend are worth considering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53082191781 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97823373461 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654109589041 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9591011894 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199862024306 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658243413844 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486294204024 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129272115075 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257719953156 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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