Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
It is a fact that many nations are facing that children are more and more becoming fatter. There are several reasons as opposed to this problems, which may lead to serious effects on the society. Although this problem put a big pressure on the children’s health, there are some methods to alleviate it.
It is undeniable that watching TV and eating fast food are the major sources that the young gets obesity. On the one hand, parents are busy with their hectic schedules, so they do not have enough time to play with their children or allow them to watch TV too much. Take young learners in Viet Nam one example, when they finish their study at school, they always glue their eyes in front of TV’s screen. On the other hand, craving for snacks, fried-chicken or potato are becoming increasing at young people, they are into eating them because of theirs convenience.
It is clear that these reasons cause negative impacts on children’s health or even society. First, children may encounter a higher risk of diseases such as diabetes, heart disease, or even cancer. Second, they will be a big burden on hospitals in the future when they spend their lives on the hospital beds. Therefore, parents are people who prevent their children before they suffer from diseases. They restrict the time children waste watching TV, and encourage them to take regular exercise. Additionally, parents give them healthy food, control what they eat to ensure that they have a healthy diet.
In conclusion, eating unhealthy food and watching TV are crucial causes to lead to childhood obesity. Although they may threat the on health of children and society, parents will limit them to improve this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, so, therefore, even so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43183609723 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.763782351 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828538086066 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347424962295 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480236626135 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766428261912 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820967130992 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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