Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of what age can be considered as a minimum driving age at which a person may obtain a driving license to lawfully drive a motor vehicle on public road. While some argue that it would be better to postpone this subject until getting 25, I believe that 18 years old people are able to shoulder this responsibility.
There is a main reason why some people are of the opinion that the appropriate age to start driving should be at least 25. They may assert that human's brain is not fully mature until about age twenty-five. In fact, immaturity is stated to be a major factor leading to fatal accident. Not being able to make rational decisions in sensitive situations, deriving from the low age, young reckless drivers may cause potentially dangerous conditions. For instance, a large number of accident victims claim to be involved in a hit-and-run accident whose driver has mainly been a teenager. This demonstrates that they are not emotionally and physically mature enough to take critical driving circumstances in their stride.
In spite of this argument, I believe that allowing the young to drive can be more beneficial. Firstly, learning power in youngsters is noticeably higher than it is in adults. They are able to master driving skill, as a fairly complicated and concentration-required ability, readily. Secondly, being more practical skill than theoretical, driving needs to be allocated enough time to be honed. Therefore, society will face with the experienced drivers provided that they are allowed to start driving from the earlier age like 18. Finally, eighteen years old is an age at which teenagers find independency in various aspects in their life such as getting married right and living separately just to name. Similarly, they are required to be autonomous in terms of having their own vehicles to commute.
In conclusion, although it might seem that 25 year old is the age of maturity, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to participate in the driving test when they are getting 18.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00285714286 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88783656047 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574285714286 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1737458066 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389652009619 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119224532534 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113262198643 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243521856024 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590816021254 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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