most government should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress?
Do you agree or disagree
Many people believe that government should give preference to science-based subjects over others in attempt to boost the country’s prosperity. Although, this policy would lead to some merits, i would argue that it is necessary for government funding to spend on other subjects
On the one hand, there are host of reasons contributing to the fact that strong human resources on scientific fields is vital to the wealth of a country. One explanation is that studying science-related subjects requires sensible thinking and problem-sloving skills which are critical for students to reap the fruition in the future. It is proven that the succesful opportunities in career of individuals who posses a mastery of science is considerably higher than those are interested in others. These scientific experts would invaluably help their country to gain a competitive edge over other countries.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that authority should not underestimate the benefits that other subjects would bring to a country’s progress. one example is the importance of languages in the era of globalization. If linguistic languages still exists, the international trades would be constrained which might lead to restriction of a nation’s economic growth. In addition, subjects namely geography and biology have introduced to students the importance of natural habitat and ecosystem to a country’s flourishing. It is clear that a country rich in natural resources would meet more sustainable development than natural resources-meager nations.
In conclusion, despite the fact that it is beneficial to a country’s progress and development when government allocated the financial spending to science-based subjects, i argue that the greater advantages could be achieved from well-rounded education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68864468864 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45772024237 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.724739602 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.181818182 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253279539432 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904897879402 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598441185517 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154465002871 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374275685646 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.