Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that it is beneficial.
To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
In the last decades, the world witnessed a trend of globalization, which means the ties in a range of areas such as politics, economy and culture have been strengthened than ever before. But now all the people hold a positive view towards this issue. Personally speaking, I think the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawback it brings.
On one hand, globalization has improved global economic significantly. A global economy means free trade between countries. Goods are produced in one country and being exported and sold in many other countries. For example, China produces a large amount of products every year and America is the largest importer of China. China can earn profits from exporting and in the meantime, American can enjoy cheaper products. Thus, both two countries can benefit from global trading. Moreover, globalization could reduce poverty in the developing world. An increasing number of multi-national companies are opening factories in developing countries, in this way, more opportunities are being created. Consequently, the standard of living in these countries can be effectively improved.
But every coin has two sides, on the other hand, there exists some drawbacks of globalization and should not be neglected. To begin with, it has been exposed that some multi-national enterprises exploiting workers in developing countries. Due to imperfect local legal system, the rights of worker cannot be guaranteed. In addition, global trade creates pollution. For instance, sea transportation is a common way for transporting goods in global trading, but cruises used for transportation may leak fuel and cause ocean pollution as a result.
In conclusion, considering the contribution of globalization, I think it has more merits than its demerits. Negative impacts of globalization can be avoided as far as possible by imposing laws and regulations by governments.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53082191781 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22385808167 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6378167917 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200017386691 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651365357596 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060671076476 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111807794533 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026708725903 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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