Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
Nowadays, a large quantity of people in the society think that their satisfaction is not equal to money. This essay will delve into the reason why human’s pleasure is not easy to be defined and what they can do in order to be happy.
It is undeniable that joyfulness in life is dependent on each individual perception and background. Obviously, in the community, most people do not have the same definition of their happiness with each other. For instance, some of them may feel blessed of having a healthy body or a family while the others could only be satisfied by materialistic things or higher social status. Moreover, many individuals’ definition of happiness is presumably influenced by their childhood. There are several cases in real life when youngsters have to work to earn money, which could help their family. Because of their hardship, these children are inculcated that only money can make them feel satisfied, which could lay a foundation for their meaning of being mirthful. Thus, it might not be possible for everyone to have similar idea of their merriment.
Furthermore, so as to become a happy person, humans should be passionate with their desire in life. For example, there are people who believe that they could feel pleased when running a business by themselves, so they may need to work harder in their career and stick to their plans no matter how many challenges they possibly face. As a result, when their business is successful, they are likely to feel fulfilled with their achievements thanks to their tenaciousness and ardor invested in their journey.
To conclude, some people argue that money could not be a factor that creates human’s satisfaction as their pleasure is based on their acknowledgment and childhood. In addition, individuals are highly suggested to accomplish their wishes with enthusiasm to attain their fulfillment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ea of their merriment. Furthermore, so as to become a happy person, humans should be...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested accomplishing'.
Suggestion: suggested accomplishing
...od. In addition, individuals are highly suggested to accomplish their wishes with enthusiasm to attain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11688311688 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84925860226 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6179310961 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181504248011 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737317970378 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609922075651 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121136732199 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430138663206 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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