Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, some people argue that many consumers are easily convinced to buy things that are dramatically advertised surround them. Whereas, others believe that human attention is not captured by these advertisements any more owing to their popularity. This essay will delve into both sides now and I share the same view with the first opinion.
It is undeniable that many advertisers try to reach their customers anywhere and sway them into purchasing products. Obviously, people are now surrounded by many advertisements in many forms such as on social media, leaflets or radios. Due to high frequency of listening and seeing advertising words, many consumers are more likely to spend a great deal of money on buying things from these commercial ads. Moreover, some advertising may even try to engage well-known celebrities as a brand face for their goods since many people have special sentiment for them. As a result, more and more buyers are triggered to buy these merchandises.
On the other hand, advertising perhaps fails to attract some people to buy its products because of its ubiquity and increasing awareness of many people. Since many individuals have to watch or hear these advertisements most of the time, they initially feel annoyed with selling ads before becoming accustomed to those stuff and thus do not care about them anymore. Furthermore, a large majority of people are now more aware of the effect of advertising on their consumerism than in the past. Thus, they probably try to ignore those advertisements as much as possible.
To conclude, some people believe that they are persuaded into purchasing goods on advertisements while the others think that advertising no longer has any impact on their notice. In my opinion, I agree with the first view due to effectively developed advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19661016949 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89443492224 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.460132296 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290139694142 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106474208158 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699738687554 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207843878399 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570031200095 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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