As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
It is clear that the demand of holding job has risen vastly in this era. The variety of life expectations has driven many people to exert more efforts and time in their career. In this essay I will explore the benefits of labor and their reflections on men's life.
Considering that work is a critical process to everyone. Not only is the financial return important, but also the values that has arisen from this. Consequently, the self-confidence is the main motivation that drags the person to maximize his energy just for this target. In addition, when people feels they are responsible of a family, and they have the capabilities to achieve their requirements, they will be blessed about it. As the ability of earning the livings is representing the mean of power that many individuals pursue it. For instance, If a man succeeds in draw a smile on his children ,when he bought them their toys, we could imagine how his happiness would be.
On the other hand, the labors have their own expectations about their life, indeed. However, the self-satisfaction is not always linked to the money, the lack of passion about the job is a chronic challenge. Correspondingly, we could witness many people who had left their work due to emptiness that they felt. Therefore, not only is admiring about ones' job is the purpose, but they should also have a reasonable aspirations about it. For example, many persons are very joyful about their work ,even though, they are paid less that is due to their personal interests.
In conclusion, the workers' evaluation and caring about their hopes cannot be apart. Conversely, if the organizations want to widen the maximal profits from their employees, they should give them all credits they are deserving, furthermore, they should pay much attention to their empathy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97368421053 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81781008415 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2754783809 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188533484771 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609378269065 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364461594701 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112587674091 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477307511714 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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