It is well known that adults spend greater part of their life working, therefore personal wellbeing is linked to job satisfaction as a crucial element. In the world of business people seek employment to fulfill their dreams. This essay will further display attainable set goals for job satisfaction.
Breaking the glass ceiling is an important element in life. It is of note especially in us females. Attaining greater position like directoral or even presidential is regarded as biggest achievement, hence bring more satisfaction apart from the responsibilities the job carries. For instance, when comrade Joice Teurai Ropa Mujuru became the first female vice president of Zimbabwe. She was overjoyed as I reinterate from her speech after the inaguration and she said, "now iam satisfied that us women can make it to those top position and I conqoured."
Furthermore, it is realistic that one can be satisfied by her carreer. According to Maslow's hierachy of needs, there are basic needs which brings satisfaction. These are achieved when get a job which pay him or her enough to take car of the family. For example, company directors have cars, house or even medical insurance catered for by the company. By the end of day, good carreer with a good renumeration will always bring satisfaction.
In addition, passion conquors mountain. Sometimes it is not about renumeration, but doing something which you are passionate of as it always make the heart merry and bring inner peace. For instance, I once encountered an old matron who did not want to retire, inspite of her age. She did not earn a fortune from her job and she also had children who were well established overseas. They would send her a lot of money. One day I asked her why she is refusing to retire and I was perplexed by her response; as she said, "I feel satisfied by just coming to work and see the patients and know that i have helped a person who is vulnerable."
Despite, good renumeration or passion nature sometimes take its course. Economic hardship always come with it's own drawbacks. For example, after completing my high school studies, I vowed to join nursing field immediately after recieving my results. By the time i get them, I could not get a placement at the school of nursing. I was dissapointed as there was nothing I can do, then i joined relief teaching which i never enjoyed a bit. I was just going to work for renumeration until I joined nursing.
In conclusion, human's expectations differs. Job satisfaction is subjective. For some good renumeration will always bring job satisfaction, but as for others doing something they are passionate about they feel satisfied apart from the beneficial packages which come with the job. Most people if basic needs are met there is satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99360341151 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97533287032 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547974413646 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.3963750605 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7407407407 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3703703704 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222493905627 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631838790189 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890078461598 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131429225458 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10017157937 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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