As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Jobs in Western countries have played an inevitable role. This could affect people’s wellbeing in both positive and negative ways. There are many conditions for someone to be happy at work and the level of job satisfaction depends on a variety of things. This essay will discuss these ideas.
First, a person’s wellbeing includes physical and mental health. Besides sleeping, an average adult usually spends most of their time working due to their responsibility for supporting themselves and their family. A typical full-time job requires people to work 5 days a week with a 9-5 shift a day which if put together it can be an enormous number of hours each year. In addition, the open-market model which has been promoted over the years in developed countries is likely to create more competition for companies which in return can put extra pressure on workers nowadays. It can be shown in the research that stress ranks among top enemies to our bodies and happiness.
Furthermore, there are two elements that can affect someone’s job satisfaction. The first is their passion for the work they’re assigned to. The question is whether it is financial gains or genuine interests, for example, in a specific industry, that motivates them to take the job. Besides the inner factor, outside things also can make a person love or hate their job. Things are like the manager’s support and understanding, coworkers’ attitude, and work ethic. On top of those are the salary and benefits that come with it, the future growth of the company compared to its rivals. In brief, the increasingly high competition in developed countries can make a huge impact on an individual’s physical and mental health. Also, the level of satisfaction can be determined by both inner and outer factors. Last but not least, it’s impossible for all workers to share the same expectations towards their jobs. This is due to the differences in age, working experience, personality, social network, and others. Each of these will have various effects on how workers see their jobs as fulfilling.
In conclusion, because of the amount of time and pressure a job may bring, its satisfaction is crucial to people’s health and happiness. The factors contributing to job satisfaction and its level may vary depending on individuals and other demographic factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in brief, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12760416667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90285863769 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4452223816 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377070551939 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954251533619 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07599531668 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231067253009 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042871418365 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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