Most people in what are known as the developed nations have homes full of gadgets and labor saving devices,
from vaccum cleaners and dishwashers to the latest in computer technology. Some people claim that despite all
these labor-saving devices, we seem to have less free time.
In your opinion, has technology improved the quality of life or made it more complicated? Support your arguments
with rerasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
Advancement of technological devices and instruments in most of the advanced countries help a human being to reduce its physical effort and time. While some people think that the inclusion of these gadgets and devices is not helping at an extent, others believe that human life got transformed dramatically after incorporating modern technological devices. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of computer and other instruments associated with it and an impact on human life and will, therefore, reach the logical conclusion.
To commence with, Undoubtedly modern instruments like dishwasher, vacuum cleaner lessen human efforts significantly and it can complete most of the households work in a few mins. Moreover with the help of computer technology office work has changed immensely. For instance, People can easily send an essential document in few clicks through email, Others usage like creating an important document, storage of document, online banking and there are myriad benefit and transformation happen.
On the other hand, there is always the downside of any item. Technology has made us too much dependent on today world. For every small item, we are totally dependent on these technologies and the consequence of it would be worse. However, if we believe that having a decent amount of free time in which to do the things we want is an important aspect of quality of life, they will probably feel that all this technology has made things worse and perhaps even more complicated.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the views that, on the one hand, modern technology has an imperative value in today human life and we can achieve innumerable benefits, on the other hand, there is a downside of it as well but advantage outweigh the disadvantage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...t of the households work in a few mins. Moreover with the help of computer technology of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25694444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91804696175 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6678944839 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.636363636 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805122632411 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297503992947 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291759340715 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460559378425 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233017295728 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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