People's opinion differ to whether communication between managers and employees or other element is more vital in most thriving groups. While there are a lot of people agreeing with the importance of communication, I believe that other factors are more significant.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why communication among the workforce is more vital. Firstly, communication plays a key role in increasing levels of labor productivity in companies. For example, a company which is located in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, has almost gone bankruptcy during corona quarantine. However, a director standing in front of the employees makes a speech to explain company's difficult and encourage their dedicating morale. Secondly, knowing departments' characters well chokes off misunderstanding, this leads to solve the work tasks more efficiently. A breakdown in communication between manufacturing department and selling department has ability to raise
transportation expenditure because of delivering wrong type of finished goods.
On the other hand, the significance of other elements cannot be denied. First, job satisfaction is one of the most important factor in creating a successful working environment. No company can make profits if the workers are dissatisfied. When employees enjoy a decent salary, with sick leave, holiday entitlement and a retire package, then the organisations will benefit enormously from the loyalty of their staff. Secondly, supportive work colleagues is also a key factor in flourishing organisations. If a worker in a company always find ways interrupting and smuggling other workers, this will lead to competent employees movement and cause serious troubles.
In conclusion, both communication and other factors are necessary to become successful organisations, but it is impossible for parties to succeed without job satisfaction as well as supportive work colleagues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...ith sick leave, holiday entitlement and a retire package, then the organisations will be...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
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...er workers, this will lead to competent employees movement and cause serious troubles. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72631578947 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35754090786 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635087719298 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4321399667 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349154881561 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102492909771 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110423752126 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176150850919 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16766407471 0.056905535591 295% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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