The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities. What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed?
Nowadays, many big cities witness huge development in many aspects leading to the phenomenon of emigration from rural areas to urban areas which cause various problems in cities. Contributing to this issue, studying purpose and the lack of employment in the countryside were considered the two main reasons. Some recommendations will be imposed later to deal with this problem.
With regard to the first reason, the number of adolescents choosing cities for their study has increased in recent years. This happened because cities, nowadays, construct many universities which are recognized with the great quality and parents who always want the best for their children believe that these universities are helpful for their children’s future. As a result, the number of students applying to city universities increased significantly, while the figure for the colleges in the countryside decreased. In other words, it causes the imbalance in the number of students between both regions.
Cities are the ideal environment for young people to build their career so that there are more young generations in rural areas today who tend to move to urban areas. Compared to the number of jobs in the countryside, it is undeniable that cities provide ambitious young people more job opportunities so that they are able to develop their career path. However, this movement results in the overload in the number of candidates, and there are more unemployed people living in cities.
After analysing some reasons for the problems, the most suitable suggestion can be applied for the purpose of reducing this movement is that the government should reconstruct the infrastructure in the countryside so that many businesses and colleges can move to these areas, which also develop the education and solve the unemployment in rural areas.
In conclusion, the quality of education and the abundance in jobs in cities are two main factors causing the movement of people from rural areas to urban areas. Therefore, the investment from the government in the countryside facilities is necessary to reverse this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...umber of students between both regions. Cities are the ideal environment for you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34234234234 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87075150216 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.780382452 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.846153846 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296295598634 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106030850679 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521277134611 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170642918669 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054610999981 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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