New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Attending parenting courses could be benefit for the parents who would have the necessary of knowledges and skills in the process of their children raising from this courses. From my perspective, I completely agree that the parenting courses will ensure the growth of their children.
On the one hand, just as I mentioned above, the parenting courses have considered that where would be able to provide the complement of aware and experiences for reaction situations which may be to occur during the process of children parenting. There would be a rang wide of real situations that if you have not enough knowledge and practice to do, it would more likely to cause some bad consequences. For example, if their first children are just 3 years old, and you have ever been not experiences for raising them, maybe they are less more likely to express what they want by words, you could be to presume incorrect their behavior and this would make them unhappy and even crying. All you need to do to prepare the best good things for their children growth as only taking part in the raising resources.
On the other hand, apart from the arguments mentioned, there are also some evidences to support this idea. Firstly, there are a lot of measures that help the children growth without attending the parenting courses, such as asking your parent experiences, your friends or even reading information on the internet by own yourself. But that things could be less likely to practice for your own children. Simply because, they would have the different kind of views about your situations and you don’t know to choose the best thing for your children. Secondly, the parenting courses where you can study, talk and even ask the profession in the children raising’s field. And the information from this courses have certainly been checked before supporting you. More importantly, there will be some situations as well as hand respectively that you can experience and do in your own issue.
In conclusion, to sure the overall growth of children, and because of their future later, the parenting courses will be appreciate and the best choose for most the parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99173553719 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61368781186 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490358126722 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7542877289 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325464083506 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133736840068 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986053972137 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243054460276 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838562367019 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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