New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The use of technology is increasing rapidly in the modern world. Growing technological influence can even be seen in the buying and selling ways. it is agreed that technology will revolutionize the lifestyle of consumers. Analyzing the ability of up-to-date technologies to both to save time for going market and give wide range of choice will show this
Firstly, new technologies can save money, time and consumer’s energy for shopping by removing the distance. The Alibaba is a good example of e-commerce that is commonly used by many all over the world as a means of shopping. If people did not use e-commerce frequently, it would be difficult that traditional buying and selling activities can cause daily problems. thus, the most sites which are used as a online shopping.
Secondly, online shops will be monotonous without distinctive products which is offered on the web page, also it can be taken advantages by both sellers and buyers. For example, the most e-commerce agents added to their services a delivering that is giving more opportunities for remote consumers. Indeed, many consumers prefer using the internet to purchase and sell, although this changes the ways of people’s life. thus, by providing exceed amount of goods that online shops are attracting more people to transfer their shopping behavior into online shops.
To sum up, we can not imagine the shopping activities without technology. it is commonly agreed that the way of consumers will be shifted by modern means of technological devices. Obviously, consumers should use online shops in order to find their necessities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2471042471 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93608971748 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3115874117 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133010749892 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537948005022 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573444006852 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907904412081 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505079227939 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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