News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?
In this technology-driven world, electric media plays a vital role in daily basis. Due to the fact that it contributes in building personal branding and easily updating current affair. I belive that it is such a benefitial way to approach news.
First of all, the reason which leading the news media become a necessary element in human life is the rapidly updating information. Futhermore, people nowadays could proactively get news instead of depending on television programs or newspaper which just have a stable time. Due to the advanced technology, people could approach informations twenty four seven just by using a smart phone connected with internet. For example, 10 years ago when the developments of internet still limited people primarily get news from newspaper and television, and they could be missed newly information, if they did not read newspaper or watch news daily programs on television. Therefore, electric media nowadays brings us a more convenient life than a decade ago with number of merits. To conclude, I firmly argue that news media more and more become the crucial things to help us to update current affair.
Due to the technology development, people could approach newly informations from different resources. Therefore, they easily get a number of view about the particular social phenomenom then encouraging them to deep insight into each information. Moreover, the conveniences of electric media build a personal branding which help people to prescribe an impression in the mind of others. For example, it is a story about my friend named James, by updating information usually, he broadens his horizon, thus in almost aspects of social life he could confidently join to discuss about them that impresses me so much. Therefore, electric media improves its vital role due to allowing people to get news immediately. I strongly argue that news media leads to a plenty of benefits.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that electric media more and more become crucial in this modernlization life due to bringing a number of merits. Thus, people feel more convenient to acquire current affair instead of depending on daily television programs or newspaper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92000698909 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517142857143 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9666118019 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107469295451 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400624620997 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313360566891 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644542201986 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305749801779 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.