The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011
The line chart indicates the total of questions that reported by the Tourist Information Office in a certain city from January to June in 2011
It is clear that more and more people wanted to express their concerns by visiting the office and sending letter or email than calling to the center. The number of enquiries received in person dramatic changed in the figures for all
In January, the sum of questions that received in person and by letter or email were approximately 450 and 900 respectively. The changes of direct requirements showed an exponentially increase and hit the peak in June at 1900. While the figures of enquiries reported by letter or email saw a steadiness on March and April; afterwards, significantly rose and got 1600 on June
The sum of reqirements that the office received over 6 months in 2011 saw a constant and gradual decrease. This figures was 700 on January period and rapidly dropped at 390 at the end of the period
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('exponentially') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...e changes of direct requirements showed an exponentially increase and hit the peak in June at 1900. While...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over 6 months in 2011 saw a constant and gradual decrease. This figures was 700 o...
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Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...ant and gradual decrease. This figures was 700 on January period and rapidly dropp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81325301205 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7371746614 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4218417654 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.8 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247649009258 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106097619677 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479734740955 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141106281417 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597573815034 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.