Now big cities have many problems. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns?
These days, it is true that metropolis cities are facing many dramatic issues. In my view, there are two major negative consequences happening in big cities, and it is advisable for governments to encourage city dwellers to move to rural areas and small towns.
Obviously, the growth in population and rapid industrialization are causing three main downsides in urban areas. First, the tremendous toxic emissions from vehicles and industrial zones have contaminated atmosphere, leading to life-threatened diseases and other health problems for city inhabitants. In particular, there is an increase in people suffering from lung cancers or respiratory diseases due to the fact that they have to breathe in the polluted atmosphere regularly. Furthermore, the increasing population in cities results in the frequency of traffic congestions, which have harmful impacts on citizens' travelling. Also due to the lack of green space in modern cities, there are the emergence of sedentary lifestyles, and this contributes to the decrease in the level of well-being of people
Therefore, I believe that governments need to take responsibility for these detrimental issues by adopting policies to encourage city dwellers to move to rural areas. In fact, this measure is extremely effective to eradicate the problems mentioned above. This is associated with the fact that when there is a flow of city inhabitants changing their accommodation to countryside regions, it would lessen the burden on big cities which are overloaded with population and create the balance in population among areas within a country. Moreover, this policy also could be practical and useful for the process of countryside modernization. Actually, these areas have been abandoned by governments and corporations because of remote and inconvenient locations, which make them remain out-of-date. By the movements of a large number of citizens, more and more companies and national authorities would invest their budget to construct up-to-date facilities and types of equipment.
In conclusion, big cities have suffered from many significant threats so individuals residing there should be encouraged to move and settle down in small cities and towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...harmful impacts on citizens travelling. Also due to the lack of green space in moder...
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Line 3, column 812, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...remain out-of-date. By the movements of a large number of citizens, more and more companies and n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55621301775 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15665915826 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3059082011 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.461538462 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342229186777 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112200952293 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109123528534 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246667079926 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109768615061 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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