Nowaday a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be band. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
In last few decades, advertising development had never failed draw public attention and provoke debates. It is true that the most popular in advertisement still threatened directly on children in communities as a primary influence. While, some people believe that these should be banned under supervision of government and have drawback at this trend. I would agree that these are advantage more than compensate any disadvantages.
On the one hand, advertising contents are undoubtedly an enormous effect on bad pattern of behaviour of the children. One reason account for this trend, the majority of youngsters access to the social network throughout the internet on their own home easily. Thus, sexual objectification of women in some contents of online-advertising caused for provocative and immodest behaviour and fashion of them.
Another reason for that a wide range of contents in advertising announcement are pointed the wrong way. For instance, interactively online of gamer under age restriction lead to a welcome change the way of thinking on children and take the most money at the pocket of children as well.
On th other hand, the government should not prevent advertisement because of the profit of economic contribution. In term of economy, there are a wide range of employment figure in which these will be out of work if the government apply restrict policies for the biggest companies in some extents. Nevertheless, instead of imposing tax on advertisement, the local authorities should have investigate companies which have irregular construction of high-rise building or luxury hotel. The fund of taxation should invest on the goal of the universal education and public heath care.
In conclusion, while children are a main reason for advertising-online action. I would believe that the government have to a necessary measure to tackle for children which have arisen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'investigated'.
Suggestion: investigated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40740740741 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19999971658 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0169892194 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.066666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245961924665 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782045373951 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512951842455 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13521403633 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357387043145 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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