More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers.
It is true that many people believe that there is no longer any role for printed newspapers in the modern world of high-speed communication. While there are strong arguments to support this view, I would argue that there is still a continuing need for newspapers today.
The advantages of news which is available through the internet, TV or radio cannot be denied. Firstly, news from all around the world can be updated by the minute, often accompanied by live video or – in the case of radio – audio recordings. Thus,those who follow news such as political events, stock market movements or those who are simply keen on sport have all come to expect instant communication. Secondly, only the most remote corners of the world now have no access to radio or TV transmissions, and the internet is casting its web to reach an ever-wider audience. The spread of alternative options has therefore reduced the dependence on printed newspapers as the sole or main source of information.
Despite such advantages of news communicated by other, faster means, I consider that printed news is still important in today’s world. One reason is that not everyone wants or needs to live their life at a fast pace. The elderly in particular often enjoy the leisurely routine of reading the newspaper over breakfast or while sitting in their living room in the mornings. Another consideration is that a printed newspaper can simply be picked up and put down at will. For example, I often read a newspaper on the train or bus to work and then I usually leave the paper on the seat for another passenger to read if they wish.
In conclusion, although they have declined in popularity, printed newspapers are still a necessary part of communicating the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90268456376 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82813249485 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7110331126 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130997308572 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460502912097 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047130936157 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680827874644 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565651670598 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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