People in their young age have tendency to do less physical activities due to busy schedule or laziness, however, many solutions available around the air to handle this situation like sports, yoga etc. There are so many arguments which supports that casting events on media like Olympics, is best way to be enforce people towards health, whereas, some people believes that instead of watching, we should encourage them to participate on sports activities. In this essay, I explain why playing games are more helpful than to watch them over the screen.
Since last few decays, Showing international games events over the television become very popular, but the purpose of these arrangements are restricted to entertainment only. it has become show business for many of the T.V channels. Some time it influence people towards sports which could help to maintain good health but all busy people forgot all those lesson after the end of show. Instead of providing such events over the Television, we should encourage them to do some physical activities which help them to stay healthy and happy. There are so many ways by which people can manage physical activities with their work. For instance, Many companies provides Gym facility in office premises, which can be use by employee at their free times.
Additionally, Government should open more sports complex and parks at each zone of a particular area, which give opportunities to individual to participate in sports of their choice and area to do exercise. It has been seen by various studies that many people do not get place or environment to play or for yoga nearby their home stay. Because of this they become redundant and not be able to do any specific activities to being healthy.
In conclusion, I am strongly believe that putting yourself in any kind of activities which help you to being healthy and happy is better than watching games over the channels or internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... casting events on media like Olympics, is best way to be enforce people towards health...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s are restricted to entertainment only. it has become show business for many of th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
... become show business for many of the T.V channels. Some time it influence people...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
... many of the T.V channels. Some time it influence people towards sports which could help ...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this lesson' or 'those lessons'?
Suggestion: this lesson; those lessons
...d health but all busy people forgot all those lesson after the end of show. Instead of provi...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
... healthy. In conclusion, I am strongly believe that putting yourself in any kind of ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00310559006 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61911738137 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8822955631 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152845059565 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551392396696 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404782283161 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092983896191 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465076338815 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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