Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Animal experiments have been using for medical and scientific researches for a long time. However, people hold different views toward this issue. Some people believe that such experiments should be prohibited, while the supporters argue that animal testing is still necessary.
On one hand, some people against animal testing for ethical concerns. For example, the laboratory mice used in testing might be ill or even dead because of experiments, the benefits of research using animals do not justify the suffering caused. Furthermore, opponents of such experiments argue that human have no right to hurt other animals for human’s own benefits, all the creatures on the earth should be treated equally. Scientists should use alternative methods of research.
On the other hand, animal testing is still the most reliable method for medical research. For those who support animal testing, they believe that plenty of people cannot be able to trust the safety of a new drug if this drug has not been tested by animals, they will be afraid of its side-effects. They claim that opponents of animal testing may feel differently if their own family needed a medical treatment that had been developed through animal testing.
Personally speaking, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical use. As a fact, animal testing for the cosmetic industry is now banned in many countries. But it might be necessary in new drugs development.
In conclusion, it would be wrong to completely ban animal testing for medical research until reliable alternative methods have been developed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31102362205 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73526862728 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9161475529 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359286229577 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138242535038 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632640397382 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218120079492 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570079636438 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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