Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Current years, people get used to using animal experiments to produce new medicine and assess the safety of products. this issue has still been gone on to argue whether it should be banned or not.
First and foremost, trial on animal really bring a greater advantage, that is the safety absolutely. When a company produce a new drug or therapy treatment, they always find a secure solution for customer. Therefore, animal experiment is the best choice which they need. using animal will remove risk of health and they can analyst many results in order to choose conformity way of human. Additionally, with some animal, for instance mouse or rabbit, they have a short life cycle and fast breeding speed, so they compatible with making disease model easily. Furthermore, scientist confirmed mouse and human have general original, so using animal experiments carry a marvelous benefit to humanity.
However, admittedly, damaging or killing a large number of animal is moral violation. Each animal is also a life which seem like human in the nature. so, numerous of people required government must action aim to banned using animal. they believe that animal need to protect but they do not refuse many benefits of using animal. Then, government and scientist promulgated the law to tackle this problem. we must limit the total number of animal minimize, use correct purpose and do not make painful.
In conclusion, people can develop new medicine and to test the safety of other products by the aid of animal. in my opinion, because of human and animal benefit, we should use animal effectively and sparingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91911764706 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.2743595064 2.80592935109 259% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2691352521 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293584753779 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946120801774 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644173099145 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190888707729 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658410098306 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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