Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that stars are known for their expensive lifestyle rather than their accomplishments. Few individuals think that this mentality is not good for our younger generation. Others, however, feel that even though we are more focusing on their personal life still they are setting any wrong example for teenagers. I completely agree with the former statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
Nowadays, due to the increasing usage of social media, school kids are getting easy influence by them as it has become easier to connect with celebrities. For example, If an actor is currently shooting for his next movie in a different location, still he can reach out to his fans through Instagram or Facebook. As a consequence, the youth is getting more attracted towards them and they try to copy their idols. Moreover, while doing so instead of getting inspired by their struggles they tend to concentrate on their glamourous looks.
Furthermore, another important aspect of this is the media. The current media houses are more concerned about their television profit rate. As they are getting more views on promoting their charismatic and fascinating way of living, they continue to do so rather than showing motivating and inspiring facts. For instance, during the Olympic games, we have seen many athletics winning awards but also need to showcase the hard work and the challenges they have overcome. This will encourage our generation to set goals and guide them to fulfil their dreams.
In conclusion, a mutual effort of parents and grow individuals of the country can teach our upcoming generation to have a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09489051095 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72142397216 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7272977311 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314613387005 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102818182917 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056594863803 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171979807374 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120873622829 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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