The proportion of superstars has surged significantly in numerous fields. These days, while some famous personalities remain in the limelight for their treasure and charisma as opposed to their accomplishments, i believe there exist numerous famous persons who become an idol for younger generations. This essay will first discuss on how few stars generate negative impacts on teenagers and secondly, why the celebrities seem entirely worthy for youngsters with relevant examples.
On the one hand, exertion of unfavourable influences on the attitude of juveniles remains one of the major drawback...
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since binge drinking is cool and they can stay as fit as a fiddle.
since being drinking is cool and they can stay as fit as a fiddle.
Sentence: Therefore, his gruelling endeavours have naturally tempted infinite younger players to follow his footsteps worldwide in astounding ways.
Error: gruelling Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1913 1500
No. of Different Words: 255 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.466 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.838 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.289 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.251 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.453 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ma as opposed to their accomplishments, i believe there exist numerous famous per...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for youngsters with relevant examples. On the one hand, exertion of unfavourabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62857142857 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9389488611 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8929650199 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.882352941 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211679470372 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515408718225 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455150524272 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108356166205 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677806878181 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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