The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.

Essay topics: The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.

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The given bar chart illustrates the estimated proportion of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.

Overall, it can be seen that running cars for work was the most popular among both genders. It is interesting to note that while the majority of men drove cars for recreation, women run cars for shopping.

As regards work, men constituted just over 50%, far higher than females at 39%. Next, with respect to shopping, men were no where near as close to women with 10% for the former and about 18% for the later. Third on the list were courses with females standing at about 14%, nearly two times more than the men at around 7%. Recreation headed the subsequent list, with males surpassing considerably the females at 12% vs 3% respectively.

In contrast, travelling by cars for other purposes remained below 10% for the two sexes. Running Errands, Visiting friends and going to banks stood at around 8% for women, whereas males represented exactly half at 4%. Regarding the visiting town, almost 10% of men went by car, however, only 2% of women drove cars, the lowest figure, compared to the remaining ones.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ext, with respect to shopping, men were no where near as close to women with 10% f...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Recreation headed the subsequent list, with males surpassing considerably the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, third, whereas, while, as regards, in contrast, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80729166667 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46062194846 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.145470955 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151621485746 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821025751132 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167259822104 0.0843802449381 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17790456941 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230726991465 0.0819641961636 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 192 200
No. of Characters: 872 1000
No. of Different Words: 128 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.542 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.464 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.02 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.652 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4

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