Nowadays, children and teenager play more and more computer games. Parents think computer games have little value and more harmful effects. What's opinion?
In these days, more and more personal computer games are played by the juvenile and offspring and birth-givers foresee that playing these games have meager value and have the more detrimental influences. I personally believe this statement because I think so that playing minicomputer games have more negative effects than the positive effects.
On the negative side, firstly when youngsters and adolescent are playing more and more video games then it distracts them from their studies and also they devoted most of their time to the video games which enhances concentration power towards the games not to their studies. A good paradigm to mention here is that, Nowadays majority of the people devoted their time in playing the most popular game of the year is PUBG which diverts the mind of the youngsters towards these games rather than concentrating it on the valuable study.
Secondly, playing the video games as well as computer games put the bad effect on the mind of the youth and made them the addictive persons. In addition to this, a kiddie as well as minor have a pernicious consequence on their physical and mental health as they are no longer participating in the physical activities like cricket, football, volleyball and basketball as well. Moreover, these type of games put the adverse effect on the eye sight of the children because of more paying attention to the computer and video games as well. A mention worthy example to cite over here is that, According to an article approximately 70% of the younglings now devoted their time in playing the videos games which leads to the major problem in them such as heart ailments, cholesterol level, high blood pressure and many more because of the no participation in the physical activities and games.
On the positive side, playing the games online through the computer enhances the cognitive skills in the youngones because they are playing that type of games which requires a lot of mathematical skills, ability to understand, concentration power like a games of puzzles and many more these type of games required a plethora of high level of thinking skills.
In a conclusion, albeit there are some positive effects yet it has many pernicious influences on the juvenile while playing those games which involved not any physical activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i think, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05483028721 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67613704189 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462140992167 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2564095667 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.6 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318657239991 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153904179109 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106532648892 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19562125111 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122605146425 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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