It is undeniable that families are spreading from each other. Family members are not living close as most of people live in past. Many people become useful to this process. There are so many reasons of this and its advantages also overweigh the drawbacks of it. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
As my perspective, so many people are living far away from family members. For instance, most of people live in big cities due jobs. They have big jobs so many people work in big companies to get good salary and live away from family. Along with this, most of students also live away from family members to study well in big schools and colleges. In big schools they will study good and set their career easily.
Furthermore, most of people do not like to live in joint family so they move to another place to live better life easily with happiness. Addition to this, young generation is totally distinct from past generation. Children are open minded some families do not like their behaviour. Then, their parents send them to boarding schools in which children encouraged to learn about past and moral values. People like to live in nuclear family but their is so many people living in joint families. They move to another place to live in a small family.
However, these are not only the cause of this problem there are several reasons leading this problems. Moreover, most of people Focusing to set their career they do not care of their families. People face harm sickness but they focus on their future to make their future bright. Further, in this modern epoch peole have to earn good money to fulfill their financial needs and live better life. So, they cannot care how they will live away from family.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it is important to live together in a family but there are so many reasons that force people to live away from families.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... Family members are not living close as most of people live in past. Many people become useful...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...not living close as most of people live in past. Many people become useful to this proc...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocess. There are so many reasons of this and its advantages also overweigh the dr...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...away from family members. For instance, most of people live in big cities due jobs. They have ...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...live away from family. Along with this, most of students also live away from family members to s...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...et their career easily. Furthermore, most of people do not like to live in joint family so ...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ople like to live in nuclear family but their is so many people living in joint famil...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...oblem there are several reasons leading this problems. Moreover, most of people Focu...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...easons leading this problems. Moreover, most of people Focusing to set their career they do no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67664670659 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23068158528 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461077844311 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4367580972 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194686222271 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733121700943 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617951363096 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13198529712 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655532649689 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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