The devastation of water-bodies has been a popular issue today. There are various of causes which are responsible for this adversity. Thus, the effects to human and animal are detrimental. There are many considerations to discuss to be able to learn more about this major catastrophe.
One of the many causes of water pollution is the point source pollution which are industrial plants scattered on the different parts of the world. These plants have been discharging by-products passing through the industrial pipes, straight directly to water bodies such as sea, lakes, and ocean. Thus, affects a major concern to the marine life environment.
Another cause is the sewage leakage underground amid a poor construction and engineering. Hence, this issue may contaminate the waste system underground. In addition, the oil spill from boats on the ocean is also a huge contributor to water pollution, because it is harmful not only to fishes but also to the sea plants which are the sources of oxygen in the ocean.
The effects of contamination of heavy metal content like lead, mercury, and magnesium to the water surface, affects the marine animal due to lead poisoning. This is the primary reason for the high mortality rate of fishes as a result of the polluted water environment, and then affected fish enters in the food chain. Consequently, the effects in human’s health are crucial nd severe.
To sum up, although these causes which contribute major effects to the water pollution are difficult to overcome, people can still mitigate this adversity by being disciplined and responsible member of the community. Hence, people must realize that water is one of the essential sources of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discuss being'.
Suggestion: discuss being
...ental. There are many considerations to discuss to be able to learn more about this major cat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, still, then, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14079422383 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83959287131 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1034400221 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00553121279999 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00144099696278 0.084324248473 2% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00539171693011 0.0667982634062 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00327263147341 0.151304729494 2% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00654526294682 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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